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"Loyalty"
  by Ciara


Let me effusively express whats on my mind
Loyalty is the subject of discussion:

Im entering this conversation with Pre-Caution.
I choose my words carefully because I dont wanna step on any toes
I mean, Loyalty has so many meanings but only one Pro.

I like the definition: "A feeling of Devotion/Duty"
Does love have a role in being loyal truly?

Dont want to feel like a prisoner in your possession
dont wanna feel like Im always second guessin..
sometimes 3 and 4 times, stressin.

We cant turn the other cheek or turn our backs on each other after we say "I Love U"
Because we say it so freely, then it must be true

How many times do I have to prove that my love and devotion is pure
Going thru the pain and heartache, Love and happiness we endure..

Loyalty is the subject of discussion:

So where does jealousy or suspicion come into place?
when this thing called love is suppose to be our saving grace.
The case of u loving only me and vice versa.
I know this relationship is suppose to be a road, a goal, a time to mold me into u and u into me.
My lover, my husband, my king.
Loyalty is just this thing that I think we r missing.
It could be me trippin
but I just want u to listen...
with your heart and let me speak to your soul and tell u all the untold dreams that I want to unfold.. with u
Because as your loyal lover, wife, and queen
I want the meaning of "Devotion and Duty" to be as it is.. "A Mean"


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Date Submitted: Aug 04, 2009 (12:01 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/05/09 (10:37 PM)
Author: Big B00
Poem Title: Love & Loyalty ( web...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  ndependent
10/10/09 (02:23 PM) 
*claps* the realness in this piece.. is what i loved most about it.. you made a very good point about loyalty..I don't think I've ever though about it like that.. but it's true.. loyalty should be as it's defined..not as we see fit..

  Planted Daisie...
09/28/09 (06:39 AM) 
you have a great way of expressing yourself and your message is so profound...nicely done

  Tonya
09/18/09 (09:43 PM) 
i loved this...nice poet

  mindigoblue
09/18/09 (09:13 PM) 
Very well spoken baby sis. I'm feeling the frustration of what is known but unforthcoming and now questioned. I can certainly appreciate the way you broke it down here. Very concise.

  Big B00
08/05/09 (06:10 PM) 
Got my barret on black turtle neck snappin my fangaz!! lol very elegant write mami 10 stars and uhhhhh welcome back carterlol :-*

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