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"Lust & Love"
  by NyamhPoetry


Take a timeless eye reflecting at the
Star's supernova of the
Sky's distance-less questions
Of why and when and where and how
And who

Everywhere I look
They experiance the sweet poison
Of lust eventually branching off to
Love and I wonder
If it's the universes scheme
To keep me away

Because everywhere I look
Nothing jumpstarts that substance
That draws humans into beautiful insanity
I need to be blinded by something that isn't of common
Humanity

But maybe I'm simply yearning
And searching for that which is not romantic
But just unconditional love
Of which I sense I lost
At the crazy insane but past so incredible
Venomous rain of lust
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Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2009 (04:00 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 10/15/09 (04:50 PM)
Author: santiago's p.o.v
Poem Title: pace this heart...

Date: 10/06/09 (05:48 PM)
Author: stranger
Poem Title: Life with the muse

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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  คว...
10/19/09 (12:09 PM) 
its sad the we allow such an emotion to control our being...actually we allow both of these emotions to control us...funny how they can both end negativly....destroying our inner self...your words were purely poetic if i do say so myself...beautiful piece

  G.A.
10/07/09 (07:24 AM) 
outdone yourself in this drop Nyah.. lovin this one mainly cuz you are commandin respect and also sayin the truth on how everyone are experiencing the sweet poison and then branching off onto love that line was nothin but the truth.. much respect

  mizemotion
10/06/09 (11:57 PM) 
very beautifully written you commanded respect in this piece and i agree with DAWN when she quoted the lines that you wrote...really beautiful write and it's very indepth....much love....peace out... mizemotion

  Dawn
10/06/09 (08:33 PM) 
you know I'm adding this to my favorites...beautifully written my favorite phrase "But maybe I'm simply yearing and searching for that which is not romantic but just unconditiona love" beautiful..one love sis

  stranger
10/06/09 (06:17 PM) 
To me this is the most beautiful use of poetry, to expos the lies by which most live since the lies bring misery home to all who follow them ... our ways built on empty promises that desire for this or that can ever bring happiness that lasts ... only lovingness for all can take one beyond time though and give peace within for a lifetime...

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