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"Lyrical Prodigy"
  by patience


Lyrical prodigy

this poem is ment to be read slowley
b/c the rhyms arnt on beat


Lyrical prodigy if it aint me
It has to be another lost dream
Breaking from the scene
You either hate me or praise me
Love me or forsake me
Give me the world or try to take life from me
My words are demanding with understandings
Emotions un-canning
Bitch understand me
Reminisces on my intellectual flow
And every body knows
I speak the truth
Expressive from the roots
My secret obsessions are rhythms
From the boot
The century greatest
Please understand this
Laughing in your face with words you love to hate
I’m just playing
Man im saying
Lyrical prodigy
If it aint me
It has to be another
Lost dream the end!
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Date Submitted: Apr 23, 2008 (02:54 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  LeRoi.ReInvent...
06/19/08 (11:08 PM) 
Very Thorough and excellent flow. Cool!!!

  Tiff Wonder
06/18/08 (09:33 AM) 
"my words are demanding with understandings emotions un-canning bitch understand me" ... love those lines. so happy I read this. and yes, the flow is on point. 10

  Exquisite_27
06/10/08 (02:41 AM) 
i'm definately feeling this one. I speak the truth expressive from the roots, that nice I rate this a 10.

  Prophet Life
06/10/08 (01:17 AM) 
Dope flow

  KayKay225
06/07/08 (11:44 AM) 
Hell yeah...rythms frum the boot...i c u rep it all dat...can't hate on that...def 10 strz

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