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"Lyrical Weed"
  by PoeticNupe


THIS is my getaway!!
This is the time i say whateva's on my mind
You know me
I try to write poems of a different kind

I don't just sit around and try to make words rhyme
Or write in my notebook just to pass the time
My fuckin life flows through this pen
This is where my heart and soul combine
No...Better word...Intertwine

This is like my natural high
But not a single blunt has been lit
Get high wit me
Wit every line you read feels like you take another hit..
This my shit!!

I'm in my zone
Words ..
Words start droppin like rain
Sentences spread like wildfire
full of sadness, love, pain

I even begin to have flashbacks
Damn.....I'm back in the womb
I can hear the doctors yellin "hurry"
running in the delivery room

"It's a cord around the baby" they said
"We gotta get him out quick"
I remember smiling at the nurse when she realized
That cord was really my dick

Forgive me

Not quite sure if those last lines really fit
But when u get this high...sometimes
It's hard makin sense of the shit..

It's like time stands still as i smoke
Nothing around me matters..I could write for days
So many words i could use...
so many styles...
so many ways

Damn im gone..
Its like the higher I get the more I wanna read

It's gone be a long nite tonite
me....jus writing and writing..
Puffin

Lyrical weed
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Date Submitted: May 08, 2008 (12:54 AM)
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  WISDOM21
12/13/08 (02:59 AM) 
THIS JOINT GOT ME HIGH AS A MOTHAFUCKA!! LOL...MUCH LOVE AND RESPECT

  $Frenchy$
12/11/08 (12:27 AM) 
Danggggggg! Lol this was a freakin awesome write! most deff ten starz! Ive never heard somebody use getting high, mediforicly to discribe poetry... i really enjoyed readin it... lol i think my favorite line was wen you werr talkin about the doctor, and the nurse, and the cord...yeaaaa...lol tht was funny... keep doin you! again, great write!

  ButterflyDream
12/11/08 (12:12 AM) 
This was hot!It flowed nicely and the umbillical cord line was too funny.I liked the concept of this...a really great job.10starzz and a fave:)

  nieceyspeaks
12/10/08 (11:58 PM) 
Clearly this was one of the best poems ive read on this site.. the words were perfect and it flowed so well.. i was smiling while reading the whole time.. this is a 10 and a fav for me!!

  unique1luv
10/01/08 (09:57 PM) 
LMAO!!! speechless.Just...speechless

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