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"lyrically blazed"
  by B3yond R3d3mption
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Lyrical Blunt by T Lyrique


the pen..the lighter
fold up the paper..add words
the pefect blunt..puff puff

take a hit..watch ya eyes close like an eclipse
as u put my pen to ya lips..inhale my shit
inhale the words..inhale what I spit
lyrically blazed is what ya get
illmatic..hit it once I come back ya still at it
leave ya stuck on mah words..like a damn addict
dnt give me ur attention..ill grab it
now that I have it..
ima latch on to it..like metal to a magnet..aha
got the end of the blunt tip..hotter then magma

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Date Submitted: Sep 29, 2008 (09:28 AM)
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  AR-15
10/06/08 (12:14 AM) 
FIRE... you blazin real hard... nice shit

  WIZ
10/03/08 (09:49 AM) 
I'LL TAKE A PUFF ON THIS RITE! HOT DROP!

  L.edwards
09/29/08 (11:08 AM) 
very niccee what you know about that

  T Lyrique
09/29/08 (10:05 AM) 
i feel this one- u are a lyrical genious- keep writin 10 starz

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