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"make it perfect"
  by Booney
  - This Poem is a response to the poem What's Ma Name?? by MaN DiNgO


The question was
baby waz ma name
And no lie you do hav sum game
but if u really gotta ask
yah shyt aint got that much fame.
dont get me wrong
u did hav me huffin and puffin,
but if i gave you a rate from 1 to 10
you wud get sumthin...
but not much
you gotta work it and twork it,
try and make a tear come out ma eye
i need that mind blowin sex
that will make me wanna pass out and die.
but dont get me wrong
in ranking you waz high and close to the top
but before you start brangin
babi juss to let u kno you need to stop.
i mean you did handle yah business,
like you really wanted it
but baby do me a favor
come back when you can make it perfect.

{this aint no dis, it juss cam 2 mind afta readin yah poem}
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Date Submitted: Jun 26, 2007 (12:53 AM)
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  MaN DiNgO
06/26/07 (07:53 PM) 
lol...love it mama. its all about poetry on here n what comes to ya mind. weneva u get that near death sex lemme kno...lol. i got a lil sumthin but theres always room 4 improvement. def a nice write

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