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"MAKE it Rain, MAKE it FALL"
  by weezy or wayne


underneath the sheets her neck and all below
my face down to my toes
steamy in here sooo,
let me take off these clothes.
jeans jeans shirt shirt
bra, socks, draws, thongs..
NAKED....
hold up
PROTECTION for the errection.
roll my r's flip my tounge
get the pussy its wettest
legs over shoulders
i told her.babe
imma make it FALL
i licked to taste the rain drops
she said imma make rain NOw
liquid on my face now
swimming threw her sea
eating everything i see
and the rain turns into a storm
when u turn and go deep..
im battling her thigs
tounge rattling inside
cause imma make her walls fall
DOWN TONIGHT
and she rain'n and she pour'n
while my tounge explore'n
while im underneath the sheets she leak
reach her peak
afterwars she be snooring
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Date Submitted: Feb 19, 2008 (03:30 AM)
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  unique1luv
08/27/08 (11:46 PM) 
i wish i hadnt read this and im cravin right now....10strz jus 10strz

  DatKid
05/27/08 (09:46 AM) 
DIZ SHYT RIGHT HERE IZ FREEKY-DEEKY!!! U LIL FREAK...KEPP EM COMIN!!!! LOLZ 10 STRZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  ShiestyMama84
03/22/08 (11:28 PM) 
ALL I CAN SAY IZ DAMN U IZ A FREAK... KEEP DAT PEN MOVIN BRUH....

  Toyadat864gurl
03/08/08 (01:00 PM) 
o wow this wuz freaky ,but it wuz a nice write and it had a nice word play throughout the whole thing.......ah so u r a freak!!!!lol ummmmmm.....well said indeed....im goin to give u sum stars of course only bcuz u a freak j/p lol

  lyfe thru myey...
02/19/08 (03:34 AM) 
lol wooow ok ok i c u u a freak n da sheets an u got a way wit wordz lol dats wassup lets c if i can cum up wit a response lol

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