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"make it simple"
  by mz.i-20


a Lil hug that's all i need
lay next to meh
while i hear you breath
anything you do for meh
i just so sweet
incredibly
in its entirety
thats all i need
make it simple
baby
just for meh
your mii sex weed
like r. Kelly
your my air i breath
my candy chocolate bear
you taste so sweet
im just so happy you love meh
where evenly
a PAIR
to hearts, your always there
i SQUARE
with out you mii life would be going


NO WHERE!!!!!!!!!!!



Make It Like It Was - PRETTY RICKY - PRETTY RICKY
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Date Submitted: Aug 08, 2009 (08:39 PM)
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  heemee
09/13/09 (08:40 PM) 
the title fits the poem its so straight forward and simple

  Momma B
08/21/09 (09:27 PM) 
I like ...you can feel the emotion..great!

  g laflare
08/09/09 (11:25 AM) 
yeah i lke it

  KANDI_BOO
08/09/09 (10:24 AM) 
I LIKE THIS POEM GOOD JOB

  Honest Abe
08/08/09 (09:26 PM) 
This is cool. simple concept jus like the poem illustrates. Worth the read.

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