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"Make love real"
A Shanii_write_it best and N/A Collaboration


  N/A:

Breathe life into my heart so that love my beat through my veins
Allow me to be the umbrella to your tears so that I may catch them like rain
Allow my love to be plain and simple for I desire nothing more
I desire nothing less; I'll pour my heart into a clear glass so that you know what's in store
I assure you that all I feel comes from my core
So believe me when I say that I'll love you till love erupts from your pores
I adore mi amour for her essence is alluring
I dream of her at night only to wake up in the morning

  Shanii_write_it best:

that feelin, omg god that feelin
it takes ova ur spirit then has u reachin for tha celin
doin things u wouldnt normally do when ur not in it
like Mario would say you should let me love you
leave me breathless so I can show u whut my love can do
if u give me that chance i promise i'll stay true to u
let me be your iced mochalatte with the cream on the top
what i can give you can never be stopped

  N/A:

I must say the way you step up to the plate, meant I had no escape
But I wouldn't call it luck, I'd have to say its fate
No wait, more than that, a blessing in disguise
I don't know what game I was playing, but I'll take you as the prize
Your eyes don't lie, and that's the truth that I'm seeking
You might not believe my words, so I let my heart do the speaking
So that you may decide for yourself what's real of me
But let me just say I'll spare you the trouble, you see
All I want is to be happy like MJB
You say you can do that for me, don't just say it, show me

  Shanii_write_it best:

Baby let me take you away i'll be yo escape
tomarrow might not come so imma show u today
i'll leave u speecheless with nothing else to say
cause as they say shantae do it best
better than all the rest, imma put yo heart to the test
are you ready to love me?
i'll make everyhting in your world seem a lil hazy
imma show you the real deffintion of love crazy


  N/A:

Well I surrender to you my heart this day
You say you the guiding light, well show me the way
I prayed for someone of such compassion and affection to match
All I ask is that there are no strings attached
Be up front like a front yard
And I'll be ya guard dog
I said, be up front like a front yard
And I'll be ya guard dog
Not stiff like a log, only in sexual situations
Love is my passion, pleasure is my occaption
So I'm going to make my reservations for one
Let me be in your heart, and when you in darkness, let me be your sun
All things positive taht bring to me
I shall return 10 fold
You can call me the human torch cause I never do things cold

  Shanii_write_it best:

you give me dis sensation that got me losin my patience
dis love im facin
but at tha same tyme ya body is da one i wanna be tastin
infactuated love makin
i'll be yours for tha taken
u said no strings, so i guess theres not heart breakin
da only breakin sound is u breakin my back
and afta all dat im a sit in ya lap
as you caress my baby phat
i'll show u a real occupation
body breakin lips shakin pleasure
i'll be yours and u kan be mine foreva
we as one is distructive togetha
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Date Submitted: Nov 05, 2007 (09:49 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  Ms Bowe
01/24/08 (02:50 PM) 
AWWW I LIKE THIS POEM ITS CUTE...

  Lil_mami2cute
11/16/07 (05:29 PM) 
that was reeeal HOTT lol i liked it. good collabo.

  ShaySoSweet
11/16/07 (10:50 AM) 
i like ilike....from the looks of yalls words yall jus got a better understandin of each other!!!!

  Shanii_write_i...
11/06/07 (07:39 PM) 
damn it did kum out pretty hott tho...now tell me...did i let u down?

  Karma
11/06/07 (12:02 PM) 
that was a nice collabo...it ran real smoothly and the words made a tone..u guys did good on this.... -Karma

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