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"Make Love to ME"
  by mmd2888
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Let Me Make Love To You by me-me


I dont usually do this but tonight im in the mood
So im gone let her take her time and do what she gone do
I let her lay me down slowly on the bed
Kissing me softly from my toes up to my head
She's sucking my toes, I must really be horny
Cuz most times I tell her I think this is corny
Smiling to myself damn this girl mus really know me
She has found my spot the one right behind my knee
I lift up my head trying to sneak a peak
but she grabs my thighs damn she such a freak
i wonder can she tell jus how wet I am
only words I can muster is baby baby damn
She runs her tongue slowly across my clit
I inhale deeply fcuk girl, oooo shyt
She bites gently down and my eyes roll back
Her head games is amazing and yes thats a fact
Without even knowing i start to grind my hips
Up and down as my juices fall on her lips
Like J Holiday I run my fingers thru her hair
and the back of my eye lids is where I seem to stare
I think im bout to bust I just cant take no more
I feel it cummin fcuk rain I make it pour
I can feel the fire, I can feel my heat
Drippin on ur face, ur hands and all over the sheets
I have this amazed love on my face jus as surprised as I can be
I came her to fcuk but you just made love to me
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Date Submitted: Mar 15, 2009 (11:47 PM)
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  kanej1
09/13/09 (03:31 PM) 
um u needa get up with me on dis one

  Ciara
09/13/09 (01:06 AM) 
Uhm uhm uhm... Very very sexy.. I remember these days... There is nothin like a womans touch;)

  AKYBSANE1
09/12/09 (09:44 PM) 
:-) wow ... get it in..lol i lik this u shown ure vulnerability and raw emotions... great write...10stars

  Wezzy Baby
04/22/09 (04:40 PM) 
dam boo this was hella sexxi hella nice write ma

  kn
04/21/09 (09:57 AM) 
THATS WAS HOT AS HELL MA WHEN CAN U DO DAT 2 ME MA

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