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"Make Love with words!"
  by DOMINICANPOET


Love me with your words...
Take me to a place... That has never been heard...
Ease my mind with statues of limitations i never imagined...
Take me to a level that will have me drunk off you like gin...
Emotionally your trying to take my breath away...
When in reality..to be by your side i have to have a respirator...
High off loving that i haven't even experienced....
Your a friend who wants to be alil more...
And i'm so afraid as you are knocking at my front door...
You want me to let you in..Into the deep barriors of DP...
You would like to know every aspect of me...
But as you move one step closer i jump five back...
Cause i'm afraid to start feeling you like that...
You say make love to you through my words...
So i'll fuck you mind...a way that has never been heard...
Implant my seeds into your membrane...
On another level that you will be unable to maintain...
I'm feeling you the way you say your feeling me...
Mine words are true...but i must know...Are your words the reality?

**alil quick write while at work took me like 5 mins so please be nice lol**
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Date Submitted: Jan 12, 2009 (02:21 AM)
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  SimplyAnointed...
01/14/09 (04:23 AM) 
Implant my seeds into your membrane...HOT

  Mz. Lyric
01/13/09 (06:05 AM) 
5 MINUTES......THIS WAS HOT! SOME WOULD TAKE A DAY OR 3 FOR THIS...YOU ARE NICE WITH THAT PEN...CAN WE GET AN HOUR LONG POEM...SEE HOW THAT WORKS.

  PeaNut.com
01/13/09 (01:25 AM) 
whoa cuzzo..so this is wat i been missin lol..ur writin got better..not sayin it wasnt great before but u kno..like u grew as a poet..im diggin this concept..

  WalkingButterf...
01/13/09 (12:08 AM) 
THIS IS NICE....I REALLY DIG IT.

  YuNeek
01/12/09 (09:06 PM) 
Took 5 minutes but was good. "So I'll fuck your mind, a way that has never been heard" Love it.

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