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"Make Me Sick"
  by Quiet Storm


U make me sick how u say u luv me
But still u wit dem chicks u put em above me
I don't need no man 2 come and bug me
Especially if they like u-border line ugly
U say i'm so mean and i got a grudge against u
U steadily botherin me iz mah only issue
Cuz if u wuzn't i wouldn't have no problem wit u
And everyday i wouldn't chew u up and spit u
Out-but u steadily gotta b lyin
It ain't even worth ya tyme so stop tha tryin
If i want a nigga i'll go 2 tha Ignorant Store
But i want me a real man and some more
If u just told tha truth then maybe we could work
-Nah we couldn't cuz mah heart u damn near hurt
And now that i'm on mah me tyme
I don't need u 2 help me shyne

It'z so sickenin tha things that u do
Even tho u kno mah luv 4 u wuz so tru
And u thought i'd be broke without u?
Boi i'm so better tymez 2
I'm tired of the stories tired of the fightin
Man we wuz worse than thunder and lightin
Y can't u accept that we're ova and done
Gave u 2 many chances u won't get anotha one

U can stop callin mah phone unless u wanna b mah friend
Don't try 2 spark up a flame cuz our relationship has met it'z end
But i kno u'll try to relight tha candle
Wut not bn mah man iz 2 much 2 handle?
I thought bn wit me wuz harder
Cuz tha gurl would stay up all night and u would neva call her
And u would neva come c me
Why when i say i don't love u now u don't believe me?
Y u still in mah face and all in mah business?
Don't worry bout wut I'm doin cuz i'm all his
And don't bother him either cuz this is wut is true
I'm stayin wit him not u
And if it don't work out then i'ma do mah thing
Either way i'ma be alright 4rm beginning 2 tha end
I loved ya boi and 4 me u were a must
But now that same luv has crumbled in tha dust
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Date Submitted: Jul 05, 2008 (11:25 PM)
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  That_Tiphany_T...
10/24/09 (10:41 PM) 
WELL DAMN. i FELT THiS FOR REAL; i\'VE BiN HERE B4. UR WORDPLAY iS UNiQUE i LOVED iT. KEEP iT UP.

  Ezdozit
07/07/08 (10:29 AM) 
Wow That was a powerful piece I am really feeling it you are very talented You really took me on a journey with this again another great piece of prose 10 stars on this one I really like it you did the damn thing Such a nice piece Rings so true

  touchdapearl2
07/06/08 (12:28 AM) 
well damn this was flowed from beginning to end this was defintely a hot write and so relatable holla

  HazeyyyBabyyy
07/05/08 (11:51 PM) 
aiight then... i'm diggin the ending, when u said u would be ok regardless... time for u to do u and sit back n laugh as he realizes how much he regrets losin u... nice flow, nice rhyme...much love for this one

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