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"Make Your Exit"
  by B. Rose


Look ma I'll never understand.
Why you deal with him at all he is not a man.
At least not in my book yo.
Just an insecure little boy trying to gain control.
Of your mental, physical & spiritual.
Now he emotionally unstable.
Not believing anything you saying.
You at your occupation he come is acrid.
He don't agree with the fact you a waitress.
So he gets angry saying you disobeying.
His orders
The he knocks you to the pavement.
That aint a good relationship.
Its more like a second job, you need Human Resources.
If you aint feeling it
You should bounce, rock, skate then.
On him because you dont need that shit.
Just end it
Find someone new and start a fresh beginning.

You shouldn't have to take that from him.
You could do so much better than him.
I aint telling you who
But if you leave him.
You will feel so liberated.
And you don't wanna look back on this.
Thinking you shouldve left sooner than you did.
Leaving him,
Things will be different.
All you got to do is make your exit.
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Date Submitted: Sep 04, 2008 (03:33 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/06/08 (01:30 AM)
Author: a fallen angel
Poem Title: stuck in a revolvin...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (12)
  Quette
09/07/08 (02:25 AM) 
This was really really really good, you put a lot into your wites and it shows. Nicely done!

  A..Po...ETic.....
09/04/08 (10:02 PM) 
He don't agree with the fact you a waitress. So he gets angry saying you disobeying. His orders ---damn...real write, thise words are sooo trueee...love it B

  Blakfiya
09/04/08 (02:14 PM) 
Hard to make someone see unless they have opened eyes. But it is good, as a friend, to tell them what you see just in case they're blind. Nice write.

  STYLES C.
09/04/08 (11:19 AM) 
This is gonna become a GOOD WOMAN Anthem... posted on lockers, Desks, screensavers... Dope drop

  Luvlee
09/04/08 (11:10 AM) 
that is so true for a lot of woman they just need to bounce roll skate on them putting up with so much crap and the dude aint even worth it!! nice write!

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