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"Mama's Baby! Daddy's When?"
  by TOO MUCH!!!


You panted the seeds & now u too dry to even water em
Hangin out in da hood & u too busy to father em

How dare you stand there & fake like u keep all real
Ridin in whips, takin trips when your babies are ill

Your a loser who chooses to be a dead beat dad
So quick to challenge my motives, when you kno why I'm mad

Football games, spelling tests, lookin just like yo ass
Christmas & birthdays done gone & they done flew on passed

So sick of lyin to shorty sayin daddy will come
Starin out the window tears droppin cuz it's already 1 (am)

Wont hurt to call not to holla at me but call for him
Could'nt touch my shit with 10 ft pole ever again

So stop your frontin & that bitch u got is triflin too
Cuz if he cant love his kids then he definately aint true

Women to women what make u think u got u a MAN
His baby crying & holdin him aint even his PLAN

(Grow up my nigga. He gone be straight with or without u but just know that when u decide to find yourself, he gone look at you, laugh and say "MAMA'S BABY! DADDY WHEN?")

P.S.
Much love to all the real fathers out there that's handlin business!!!

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Date Submitted: Sep 12, 2009 (12:24 PM)
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  da black princ...
10/28/09 (10:08 PM) 
This was a good straight to the point piece. I'm sorry you have to go through this. I was reading some of the comments people left you and it kind of pissed me off because everyone are putting guys down. Now, I agree, I hate a deadbeat dad. I wish men would step up and be a father to their children, even if the relationship don't work out with the mother. I'm the proud father of two beautiful daughters who are the loves of my life. So with that being said, I must say this to all the females. You...
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  ButterflyDream
10/17/09 (01:26 AM) 
very blunt and straight to the point,nicely done.

  Delores
09/24/09 (02:36 AM) 
wow... im pregnant now and my man is still by my side. he already bought baby clothes and the crib... So wen real men are handlin there business.. have to look at it as a gift... cuz now adays men are worthless pieces of shit.

  arealguttabitc...
09/21/09 (12:15 PM) 
DAMN GIRL I THINK EVERY FEMALE IS FEELIN THIS CAUSE THESE DUDES NOW DAYS DONT KNOW ANYMORE BUT THIS IS HELLA DEEP AND REAL

  Trill
09/19/09 (01:45 AM) 
Preach on sista cuz i feel you and i feel the same exact way.

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