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"mami"
  by Mz. G.M.B
  - This Poem is a response to the poem DADDY by D NYCE


Baby , yu always do the work
The nasty talk comin out ya shirt
Well let me tell YU how I like it
Listen daddy , if yu really wanna bite it

Touch me, up and down my spine
Tease it, blow my mind
Use EVERYTHING you've been blessed with
Show me the reason yu shouldn't be messed with

Caress me, make me melt
Worry about me, not yaself
Tell ya hand to tell me
How yu want me to be

Hold me, I'm a lady
Show me I'm your baby
Whisper in my ear
Let ya baratone say what ya body wants me to hear

Kiss me, in places only you know
Use your lips to travel where you wanna go
From my head to me feet
Give me a reason to change the sheets

Feel me, cumming on you
It's a win-win so you can't lose
All over you and that tool you posses
Relieving a hard days work, full of stress

Grip me, that's why it's there
Now use the other hand to grip my hair
Don't be gentle I don't care
Pull it back and put my head in the air

Climb with me, or stay down low
Cuz where I plan to ride, I don't think you're ready to go
Go deeper, don't hold it back
Now lift my cheeks up and give me a smack

Cum with me, I can't wait anymore
I don't know how long I can last come on daddy give me more
I can't stop shaking daddy...you know how I get
And don't say my name when you cum, just call me "mami"

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Date Submitted: Mar 23, 2009 (01:59 PM)
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  LaCherie
03/24/09 (09:09 AM) 
This was dope... eventhough IM the one that calls him daddy lol and he calls ME Mami. LOL! but naw this was cool. Nice pick up

  D NYCE
03/24/09 (09:06 AM) 
tight work yo... cleveer and nice flow... 10 stars from me.....NYCE

  Effable
03/23/09 (02:39 PM) 
Woow!! this was such a great and visual response! get it girl! but there is only girl that can call him daddy lol. but this was so cool

  B. Rose
03/23/09 (02:09 PM) 
Hey your back yo... i love this piece babygirl... such a sexy ass scribe yo...

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