i actually like this piece..."Sometimes, I think back Offended by myself Realizing u are my best creation " nice...ten starz....

wow this was such a profound response to Jay's piece. and I love how you took on the perspective of the mother and explained her pain and not only that but offered a sincere apology and new outlook. this was beautiful and very smooth for an acrostic. <---that's most def something i look for when i read acrostic. very nicely scribed and very heartfelt. i could mos def feel the emotions in this one.

damn this was an awesome write and ya did it as a response poem which speaks volumes about you asa writer because ya building on another poem which ebveryone cannot pulloff but you did

wow.. you blew me away with this response.. the perspectivei s absiolutely amazing...