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"Man"
  by touchdapearl2
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Woman by iva


Man
Father
Son
Brother
Uncle
Nephew
Im sorry
Im sorry from the depths of my soul
Im sorry that I was design from your make
Im sorry for you being appointed to lead without your permission
And im sure when you met woman you felt you had known her for years
Yet eternity was going to be the bid
And im glad you choose to share our enternal sin
Im sorry you had to stand around and watch the world rape your kids
Im sorry for being your true weakness
Im sorry for you having to sit and watch everything you build stand for nothing Attimes....
Even when you put your all into it
I watch you.....
Stand tall when there are so many reason you could fall
And so many other's waiting on that day
Even your fellow man
But I want to thank you for being my protector,provider,husband and friend
And your life on this earth has been a blessing to many
And that I cant pretend it not to be true
And it takes a woman to know that your really a delicate creature
And we as women value you as a human being
You see,my man,there's no one who can love you better then woman
I know attimes you to feel broken
Thats why I lay upun your chest right up under the rib inwhich I was broken
Because I was ment to stand by your side..
And thats just where I'll be...
Thank You!






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Date Submitted: Aug 04, 2009 (09:59 PM)
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  DPoet
08/19/09 (03:14 PM) 
absolutely freak in loved reading this poem... you got fire and imma diffidently read more fro you fo sho.. the beginning was tight and the ending rocked ... got mad skillz.. keepin writing keep inspiring.. keep it 100percent real.

  Boricua_Mami
08/15/09 (09:29 PM) 
I really like this piece. It was well thought out and was so amazing to read.

  Prodigy
08/10/09 (04:32 PM) 
I really like this piece. Makes us as men realize that we still have a long way to go but to still have reason to hold our heads up proudly...well written love...and thank you for the message.

  Chocolatezeus
08/09/09 (01:55 AM) 
You touched deeply on this. such a wonderfully thought out expression. almost like the yin and yang of things

  stranger
08/08/09 (07:05 PM) 
Insightful array of the problems of institutional gender ... one day we will teach our kids that we are all human beings ... nice piece, strong ... thank you :)

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