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"MAN RESPONSE"
  by kofi
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Single Again by disBme


HEY MA ITS COOL
I FUCKED UP BUT DATS DA
GAME WE PLAY
IM YOUNG I WASNT TRYIN
TO GET SERIOUS WITH U
ANYWAY
I COULD OF HANDLE DIS
BETTER WAY
BUT WHEN I WAS CHILD
I SAW HOW MY FATHER SLEPT
AROUND
AT THE SAMETIME MY MOTHER KNOW
WHAT WAS GOING ON BUT AT SAMETIME
SHE WAS ON BENDED KNEES BESTOWIN
MY FATHER THE CROWN
SO REALIZE THIS WAY I AM AND
IM STILL LEARNING TO BECOME A MAN

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Date Submitted: May 01, 2009 (12:28 PM)
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  disBme
05/01/09 (03:39 PM) 
LOVE THE RESPONSE IT'S WAS GREAT NICE WIRTE 10 STRZ

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