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"Manners of memories in ones heart"
  by katie-kate
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Unsatisfied by loren


Really what more do you want?

You can't say that I haven't been there for you
when I've checked on you day and night

You can't say that I haven't cared for you

when I've.....

Wiped your tears.

Held you near.

and prayed that your bad situation wouldn't last

When it was taken for granted
I left your side
trying my hardest to put any feelings for you
out of my life.

But now your back in bringing in our past
and bringing these lingering feelings for you to light

wishing that you were here with me

....wishing that the arms I feel around me aren't imaginary

But the haunting of the pain you inflicted so deeply in my heart
won't allow me to believe that we can just pick up from where we left off with a clean slate
with a fresh start.

I guess you can call this

Manners of memories in ones heart

because I don't think I could ever get over the love we shared
and the pain I felt when we fell apart....
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Date Submitted: Nov 25, 2008 (02:03 PM)
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  loren
11/25/08 (02:07 PM) 
I must say this is a gr8 response indeed. gud job....

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