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"MAN-Up Punk-Down"
  by Luvlee


Depressing poetry
That seems to be all folks want to write
Personally
I
Do Not
Care
Like I am not dwelling on the misshaps of present day time
I am looking to the hills and making good use of my time
I
Don’t
Need
To Dwell
On whats going on and think about what ifs
Like seriously I am so tired of that ish-tar
Forreal
Stop looking for a sob story
And get on your knees giving God the glory
Because that junk is so irritating
UGH

[take it how you want this is how I feel geesh get of the pity train and man up]

Duecerz
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Date Submitted: Aug 21, 2009 (08:46 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/21/09 (09:49 AM)
Author: AR-15
Poem Title: Dirty Skunks

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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  Ordained2Chang...
08/26/09 (10:01 AM) 
I think constant depression pieces do put a heaviness on the readers, but poetry for some is the only way of escape. I still see where you're coming from

  T Lyrique
08/22/09 (06:32 PM) 
Ummm- no disrespect but u mentioned : Give God the glory....but this is a hate poem. I do kinda understand where ur comin from, but some people might be in a tough spot in life and writing is the only way they can truly express themselves.

  ButterflyDream
08/21/09 (09:10 PM) 
I here you miss luvlee,nicely written:)

  MR. BYRD
08/21/09 (07:18 PM) 
cool...well taken young lady :)

  Blayzn 10
08/21/09 (04:31 PM) 
HA HA, get ova it, right? I so often feel this way but I think some people write to express, maybe not realizing it can be depressing... luckily most of us are upbeat and ready to read :)

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