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"Martyr"
  by Spit Ace


Frantic, in a daze.
The world - waiting and wasting;
its desert sands have run red.

Silence in the air.
Shells line the track of footsteps;
his heart a throbbing grenade.
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Date Submitted: Jun 27, 2008 (09:37 PM)
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  TS
06/28/08 (07:18 PM) 
amazing..."his heart a throbbing grenade.."...but before that .."the world-waiting and wasting"...descriptive yet simple...but those two lines..capture so much...very well done

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