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"Mas Alla De Las Estrellas.....(Beyond The Stars)"
  by COMPLEX MENTALITY
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Wish Apon by DOMINICANPOET


No more will I wish
For each star represents a
Failure. Something I

Could not achieve. No
More closing my eyes, looking
Up into the sky

Of deceiving lights...
A secret untold....Yes false
Hope, is what they hold....
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Date Submitted: Jul 15, 2008 (06:07 AM)
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  Shaboogie
07/15/08 (09:48 PM) 
This was short. But it was so deep! bravo mamas 4 conveying so much by saying so little! 10 stars

  Dat Harlem Chi...
07/15/08 (09:04 PM) 
wow, so short, but so deep. thats what poetry is about my sista. 10 stars all the way ~that harlem chic~

  DOMINICANPOET
07/15/08 (01:56 PM) 
damn im wit b how can you turn everything negative you startin to piss me off lol jus playin but im feelin this piece ten from me

  B. Rose
07/15/08 (12:47 PM) 
Damn you reall know ho to take somthing uplifting and bring it down to an interesting reality yo.... nice job... im loving this one... lol... cold blooded ass

  African Queen
07/15/08 (08:55 AM) 
interesting ma...

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