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"Matrix"
  by Jj


We are all puppets, I'm just the puppette
Who sees the strings.
Dolls going through the extremes,
Posing through life.
.
Sometimes it seems, like a scene
from a movie screen, compromising positions
For the puppeter.
.
Stained glassed eyes staring out, with disdain.
Seemingly disconnected to anything that pertains,
to real life issues and concerns.
.
Positioning ourselves to reach higher beams
While I long for scissors to cut the strings,
prefering to persue my own dreams.
.
Ending procrastinating endeavors,
of being controlled, like the matrix.
Are you to be the one, trapped endlessly
in forever?

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Date Submitted: Aug 23, 2009 (01:38 PM)
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  Duice
09/15/09 (01:02 PM) 
First off 10 stars! I'd consider dropping most of them commas. Loved the stucture you wrote in (artistic stanzas hanging down like puppet strings).

  angeleyes1
08/24/09 (06:02 PM) 
wow very nicely written and so damn true keep them words flowing much love

  MAVRICK
08/23/09 (02:11 PM) 
things to ponder indeed...sometimes we think we're doing what we want to, then all of a sudden we're asking ourselves why did we just do that?...nicely stated.

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