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"Maybe Its Me"
  by TUANE


You are the girl that all men dream of:

You cook
Clean
Work
In school
Then you rarely complain

When we go out, you dont mind picking up the bill, not that I ask
When my car was in the shop for a week,
You didnt even mind taking me to school, work
What ever it is I had to do

Before you go to school or work
You call me to see if there is anything I need
You do it all
But yet, I still feel that something aint right

When you go out wit yo' gurls
Im always wondering if you talking to other dudes
I even fucked up and accused you of it
I swore up and down that you was cheating

Now we are on the verge of breaking up
I just want to tell you that:
I seriously Love you with all my heart, mind and soul girl
The reason I act the way I do
Is because I never had anybody to treat me the way you do
I can be hard to deal with at times I know
But Babi gurl, give me another chance

I have never had anyone like you
I see now that you really must Love me
Cause you wouldnt do the things you do if you didnt
We still talk just about everyday and you still say
That its my actions and ways that has us in the prediament that we are in
Now I see that
It Is Me
So tell me where is our relationship going Babi gurl?
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Date Submitted: Sep 30, 2008 (02:54 AM)
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  Preacher C
11/12/09 (02:07 PM) 
Bravo! Ten stars! I'm impressed. She's a lucky girl

  dagirl2fly4hat...
10/28/09 (11:04 PM) 
this was an amazing, deep, great masterpiece love the flow of your words...{chck my wrk}

  KGgg
07/22/09 (01:11 PM) 
i understand where your coming from with this piece...thats just how it be sometimes...you cna have someone good and its jus always something in the back of your mind that tells u this could be to good to be true and insecurities start to form

  Y.D.
07/11/09 (11:09 PM) 
Wow.. "The reason I act the way I do Is because I never had anybody to treat me the way you do ", Homie I know how you feel.. aha that happens to me alot.. Dope and deep piece bruh... stay blessed .. - Y.D..

  Physical_Imper...
07/10/09 (11:52 PM) 
I love this its mad hot...u fire sweetie

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