his love makes me feel "superhuman", so i'm going to write like this is my "last chance" to write for he.
you see,
it's been "us against the world" from day one.
they.. they been trying desperately to make this bond that we share unravel & come undone
to no orevail.
but it seems like the more they fail
the harder they try.
but his "brown eyes" tell me not to feed into a lie.
to be better than that.
that the way we feel is fact,
not fiction or a metaphysical piece of poetry.
he loves "me"
and he doesn't have to express that with his pen
to have me completely open, listenin'
to his every word.
believe, he does not go unheard
as long as i'm around.
& as long as i'm down, his feet will remain firmly on the ground.
i got a good dude, now i "realize".
so i.. i listen as his heart cries,
trying to dry the teardrops of pain built up over the years.
& he's even beautiful.. thru his tears.
even beautiful with pain visibly showing on his face.
because thru the pain & the wall of anger he's built up around his heart, i see "i need you".
i see, 'i don't wanna lose you', & 'i want us to make it thru'.
so when it rains.. or for better words, pours, i'm his shelter.. i provide protection.
& at the first detection
of hurt, i kiss it away
& say
'i'm here for you, baby'.
patiently "waiting" for when he's ready to open up to me.
yeaa... the "pimp in me" is "dead & gone".
because now i look at this love thing like this, if it's not he & i, i'd rather be alone.
his love is.. "remarkable".
& without him i'd be so so miserable.
so, i stand by my man, and i stand by my word when i say "no body"
will change this love between me & baby.
i really like this line "& he's even beautiful.. thru his tears." I knwo what thats like when you feel that way about someone and look at them in that way...this was well expressed...10
hella cute babesz.. i definitely loved it and your voice.. ha.. deff did not expect it to be like that but yerr it's cute.. reading it yourself for the reader made it so much more real and the emotion just popped out because of it.. great job mama