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"Me in the View of Blue"
  by Chocolatezeus


Views in Blues


Blue moments
In undefined lines
Lay waste to
Heated core of mine

Taste of deceit
Decreed dark intents
Midnight blue hues
Surround me

Like a hula hoop asteroid
Protecting and endangering me
Rotating at astounding ways

Wearing that baby blue
Unfortunately representing
That Carolina Blues

Traveling the mountain ranges
Between the sky and mountains
Touching nothing
Azure gives me colored light

Submerging myself in
The depression of
Aquamarine
Below deep within the
Turmoil seas of living

As I sit and stew
Deeply parted from my joy
Feeling the
Prussian Blues

Needing my
Sapphire present
To release me from the
Emotional dungeon I have
Concocted

Missing the coldness of Saturn
Creeping within
Cerulean alien motions

Left only with
The true blues
As my custody of myself
Is left to
Its very own

Indigo blues

Now do you see my views


From the chocolatezeus collection 7/22/08 ©
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Date Submitted: Jul 22, 2008 (11:59 AM)
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  One
07/23/08 (10:12 PM) 
well done definitely

  One
07/23/08 (10:12 PM) 
this piece would require reflection ...deeply to determine what each version of blue represents to me

  Dawn
07/22/08 (12:10 PM) 
Wow..my mouth is open.. I love ya write..this is what I mean when I wrote the poem "dickin me" I love poems that take it to a new level, it conforms outside of the box and beyond what we'd like to think as normal..thank you for this mental orgasm

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