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"Me without U"
  by Mizunderstood


And each day i spend without u... one more piece of me i lose. U r me jus as i share your identity...i shed tears in your presence cuz i know its merely temporary... I tremble in your absence afraid its permanent... But if time permits... I'll press pause in my thoughts of u.. My mind takes mental memories... So that wen you're away from me.. My heart has your imagery. My body becomes still as it meditates on your beauty... For days... more specifically.. Four days.. I sat in a daze..as my memory recovers pg by pg.. Your stored pixels... I blush turning the color of a red pop sickle... As i become sticky and wet...now ima mess...4 u.. Over u.. Bc of u... C baby without u my skies r purple not blue..i only have a half moon.. Cuz without my other half.. There's no point in attempting math.. U minus me only equals negativity... Which leads to cardiac uncertainity... It doesn't know if its living or dying.. Breathing or wheezing... Baby jus b near me.. Maybe if i hear u breathe it will convince me... That life is still worth living
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Date Submitted: Jun 03, 2009 (02:52 PM)
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  studlyfe
06/07/09 (11:04 PM) 
excellent

  Chocolate City
06/03/09 (06:16 PM) 
wow!!! applauses for this write. im feeling it 100% "i only have a half moon.. cuhz without my other half.. theres no point of attempting math"... im diggin that.. as well as the whole poem.. this is a fav

  --->QUEENPIN O...
06/03/09 (03:44 PM) 
U minus me only equals negativity... Which leads to cardiac uncertainity.<---man...im goin thru these emotions right now... =(

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