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"Meanwhile..."
  by drybaggij
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Sitting Unnoticed on Your Shoulder by getchamndrite


Meanwhile,
the chair still sits bolted.
Due to the frequent rail switches.
You already know the train pitches,
side to side
on it's tumultuous ride
and slows not
even when it's time to decide...

But the chairs up there.

Meanwhile,
there's no fuss and no shout
and the weirdo comes out
and I'm sinking without

Mentally
Eager
Altruistic
Now
Innocently
Noble
Goal
( cause you'd have had to been up there to know what they were talking about)

and

Meanwhile,
Your every publish thought
I'm present
I linger to catch a scent
or discover each ones

Mentally
Earnest
Always
Nitid
Innocent
Noble
Growth
( leaving questions like )

Why when emotions are showcased
the "Just wanna make you smiles..."
and "I like how you write"'s
cease and desist?

On one side or both

and
Meanwhile?

I'm wondering why you thought you weren't welcome to a chair you brought with you in the first place?
or
Maybe I'M high.

Am I High (Explicit) - N.E.R.D. Featuring Malice

Cause the chairs still there...



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Date Submitted: Dec 01, 2008 (03:28 PM)
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  Blakfiya
12/02/08 (08:28 AM) 
love how you responded to Get's piece...feels like perception to me. Being pinned into a form due to rough rides and what not when the object hasnt changed. Love it.

  --->ROXIE<---
12/01/08 (03:38 PM) 
AHHH....this was kinda bittersweet to me...if im reading correctly it like u car about someone who really doesnt realize the depths of ur feelings...even when it's so obvious?? im pretty sure i read that right "Meanwhile, Your every publish thought I'm present I linger to catch a scent or discover each ones " <--- i notice im like that too with a few ppl....this was still beautiful even though it had a sad vibe..a different side of u...which i like...nice

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