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"Meet and Greet"
  by Dana Dane
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Initial Penetration by Soultalk


After weeks of conversation, anticipation and preparation, the moment we've both yearned for at last has become a reality
Skipping all formalities we allow our bodies to express thoughts and intentions
They speak fluently without hesitation
Taking a deep breath... they finally met... Mr. and Ms.
Pleased to met each others acquaintance
You make sure they carry on a long... deep... conversation
Knowing the exact things to say to make her cumfortable
All the times you said you were gonna fuck me soo good... you spoke nothing but the truth
Mmm... I smile, knowing that was only an introduction
Watching my chest raise and lower, trying desperately to catch my breath, experiencing aftershocks
My body still tremors
Here I lay, intently watching you to see what will be your next move
As you pull up a chair to the edge of the bed, I know what that means, you're ready to be feed
With the first few flicks of your tongue...
"Oh... papi" I call out
In my mind I'm thinking "girl you may have met your match", but as you take a seat I ready myself for your attack
You have me right where you want me, holding my hips so I can't move, your finger in my mouth
Feeling so good I curse and moan loudly, aint no shame in my game, just let me inform you... you wont be hearing your name
Not from these lips, see that’s not my style
It matters not that I haven't had any in a while
I'm gripping the bed ready to give you my sweet caramel, my body shaking
You only increase the pressure on my clit making me cum intensely
Raising your head you lick your lips, then lean in and give me a kiss and let me taste how sweet it is
Now it's your turn, no meet and greet would be complete without me bending before you... on my knees
This scene will continue for quite a while I'm sure then we'll rest...
Till the next round

{(@)}-%~DDB~
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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2008 (04:26 PM)
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  Magic101
12/10/08 (12:40 AM) 
wow you bring the hotness in this piece... i enjoyed it. keep doin your thang. 10 starz

  Dawn
12/06/08 (12:12 AM) 
somebody's got nasty on there mind..but it's a good thing......meet and greets are okay...loving where you went with this poem...go girl.

  WIZ
12/05/08 (09:32 AM) 
CONGRAUDITIONS POET OF THE DAY! THAT'S A HOT EROTIC DROP! ROCK-ON!

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
11/25/08 (10:00 AM) 
well, im sure mr soulcast himself would be very pleased with this piece. I know I was!

  J.L
11/18/08 (12:35 PM) 
yezzir!!! I like it,I love it,the word play,the flow,damn ma!! you did the damn thing! "you have me right where you want me" so submissive,yet firm & ressistant,go on,10.

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