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"Melancholy Haters"
  by A~BENEVOLENT~QUEEN
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Hi Hater! by N~Tyce


U see me
Pimp Hard and get much doe
It's alright ya'll haters
It's nothing but cash flow
U see me
Hi Hater Hi hater Hi hater
U see me
Hi hater Hi hater Hi hater
U see me
Hi hater

Undercover wit yo shit
Always talking under your breathe
Mad cuz you ain't on like me,
I'm laughing at you while I'll continue to stack my wealth
The sudden movement of your tongue
Only proves how foolish and dumb
Your absurd comments are
Hating on me cuz I'm a hood superstar
What drives and motivates you hater?
Fear, Jealousy, and Ignorance of something that is greater...ME
I will only continue to shine,
And so I'll continue to cater
2 you
As you only worry about what, when, and how I do
Your foolish acts
Small as sidewalk cracks
08 my year, hell nall
Every years my year! fuck that!
Excuse me haters, please step back!
Future so bright
Here hater, you can borrow my Dolce shades
Be me for a second, cuz that's the only way
You won't be a hating ass bitch
Be ready 2 scratch my itch
Cuz I'm allergic to lame ass spongebob tricks

U see me
Pimp Hard and get much doe
It's alright ya'll haters
It's nothing but cash flow
U see me
Hi Hater Hi hater Hi hater
U see me
Hi hater Hi hater Hi hater
U see me
Hi hater

Resident Evil
The Geen Eyed Monster resides in your heart
Never allowing you 2 get ahead for a fresh start
You still caught up on the last ladder that I climbed
The hate that pumps through your veins for me, is lethal as suicide
Mad cuz you don't ride like I ride
Trying to emmulate me, only a mere spoof
Recognize and bow down...My style is bullet proof
Sad cuz everything that you attempt comes across as stale
Let me help you dear
I got MAD SWAGGA for sale!

U see me
Pimp Hard and get much doe
It's alright ya'll haters
It's nothing but cash flow
U see me
Hi Hater Hi hater Hi hater
U see me
Hi hater Hi hater Hi hater
U see me
Hi hater

I pops many bottles of criss
While you pop piss, thirsty ass shit!
Check me out at Dreams any weekend
I promise you dont wanna miss
Me or my crew holding down the VIP
That's for Very Important Pimpstress
A.K.A
Team Dimestress
A.K.A
FAFA's
Fly As Fuck Always
Never to be disrespected
Baller's cut the checks and want to collect it
Check it!
Bye Hater!




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Date Submitted: Aug 04, 2008 (10:58 AM)
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  --->QUEENPIN O...
10/04/08 (08:59 AM) 
LMAO @ MAD SWAGGA 3 SALE!!!....ME TOO MA....DAMN U SNAPPED ON THIS...LEMEEE FIND OUT SOMEONE IS PISSIN OFF MY BOO...LOL....FLOW WAS ON POINT...SHIT BETTER THAN THE SONG LYRICS THE IDEA CAME FROM! DOPE

  XPERIENCE
08/21/08 (07:39 AM) 
lmaoooo! i cant hate on it... lmao at the background... u tell them haters that u are fully staffed this year and that if they wish to, they can re apply next year because the position has been booked.. haters need people like u and i to stay in bizness!!! so just look at it this way.. u give haters the business opportunity of a lifetime..the unemployment rate will decrease because of u..doesnt that just do ur heart dandy?? lmao loved this joint!

  touchdapearl2
08/04/08 (05:17 PM) 
wow....this was crazy and you found a backgrounf too....i cant wait tell this faze with everybody worried about all the wrong things in life stop....people just dont think about making lives for there self anymore just want to control your's and that just plain rude,hot write mah! hi hater's

  B. Rose
08/04/08 (03:08 PM) 
Get em!!! I lpove the writes about haters yo... im feeling this... I think I may want to respond yo...

  Ordained2Chang...
08/04/08 (12:04 PM) 
Yet another strip of fire from the Queen herself. I'm lovin it... this is vicious. The flow was bananas on this one. Keep it straight. And F dem haters, but haters make you greater mama! *Snaps*

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