Commented on the poem "lie to me" on 08/20/09 at 07:26 AM
*throws hands up...FAMILY...at times its just like this..I feel you, O hurt as well reading this
Commented on the poem "aluap" on 08/20/09 at 07:24 AM
I hear a heart beat... best wishes
Commented on the poem "lights" on 08/08/09 at 09:42 AM
Imma get back to u on this...but this is deeply philosophical...as well as genius...I like the way the words almost seem lighthearted and bouncy....like they frolicking through the readers thoughts....I feel u
Commented on the poem "Diffusers" on 08/07/09 at 05:56 PM
I can dig this metaphor...conveying what ones internals may contain...and translating it all into scents,substances,spirits...The end to me seems like the contents have been wasted...and now all we can do is want