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Nickname: 11th Wonduh
Country: United States
City: flint. michiganian, now chillin in the cornfields of london
State: OH
Gender: Male
Age: 33
Member Since: Dec 06, 2006
Last Login: Nov 20, 2008
Poems Submitted: 392
Average Ranking:
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Poem Comments: 4,633
Poem Views: 33,522
Member Comments: 1,242


About Me
 
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About Me:
what's happenin. relax your soul and allow me to invite you inside the mind of the h. (h.super for short) exactly what the hell is the h.? we he's a down to earth brother with the soul of a funkateer and the thoughts of the old school poets, who i like to call pre-emcees influenced by the truths of gil scott heron, the last poets, the watts prophets, lightnin rod, etc. good shit is meant to be written, and if you feel what you writing is the real, then you are speakin the truth. thanks to all those who have shown me in such a short amount of time. if this is your first time, here's an open invitation.

 


1. Stream Of Conciousness
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2. Lost Love
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3. In Love With The Mis...
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4. A Poem For Twillight
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5. Somewhere Between He...
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6. Oops Oh My
      by DREA23
7. History
      by StraY12
8. Turtle Love
      by Jody
9. Change Gone Come
      by stricklyfromthesoul
10. Life Response
      by MR_U.N.K.N.O.W.N
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1. The Wizz
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2. Death Series [pt. 7 ...
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3. White Girl Done Lost...
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5. Deaf Ears (double Ac...
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TITLE CATEGORY RATING DATE SUBMITTED VIEWS COMMENTS
sensuous soul brunch w/ keyshia after... feeling good Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/19/08 (01:58 AM) 17 1
porn poem #2 aka the scarlet rose suite erotic Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/07/08 (12:16 AM) 115 8
avangelyne's mystique II erotic Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 10/30/08 (02:34 AM) 54 6
.syllustable II. feeling good Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 08/21/08 (12:31 AM) 72 5
inevitably fallin feeling good Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 08/13/08 (12:55 AM) 145 10
junkie wisdom pt I reality Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 04/18/07 (02:51 AM) 439 100
game of hide n' seek (rose baths) haiku Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/20/08 (03:37 AM) 11 2
grayskys (bye love) emotions Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/19/08 (12:32 AM) 36 6
winter's desire love Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/18/08 (12:11 AM) 69 11
red clay (dialogue w/ my spirits) metaphysical Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/17/08 (01:36 AM) 17 2

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 Commented on the poem "Content" on 11/20/08 at 02:16 AM
i like the message, freeing your mind and let your soul be free is my mantra on life. can't live w/ restrictions. once again, another positive piece of writing

 Commented on the poem "True Happiness" on 11/20/08 at 02:08 AM
must agree, when you have a peace of mind, understanding of self is much more understood when you confidently know who you are. more of a philosophical thought with its innerworkings, but the words scribed speak the absolute truth

 Commented on the poem "Setting Fires (Blazing It)" on 11/19/08 at 12:45 PM
absolute dopenuss. first line set it all off for me. just a hot (no pun intended) piece altogether

 Commented on the poem "Sentimental You [Smoky Serenade]" on 11/19/08 at 11:44 AM
romantic, nostalgic & other superlatives that fittingly deserve praise. again simply beautiful

 Commented on the poem "Moonlit Rain" on 11/19/08 at 11:41 AM
i swear, one day i will write to this level. in it's traditionalist form, this is beautiful, again, natures elements in its simplest form can be so eloquent & so beautiful

 
  unofficial guide to understanding wonduh's poetry
  November 09, 2008 at 05:09 PM

((iight, word is that many don't connect w/

my writings, they're either way too abstract,

out the box, or simply difficult to connect.

so w/ that, here's the unofficial guide to

understanding, me))

((thought #1, use your imagination))

i scribe w/ visions, comprehensive visions. i summon those

visions into my writes. thus you get a picture in writing

straight up, if you scan, then read, you miss intricate details

sidenote, there have been times where certain writes are subliminally

dedicated to certain individuals. & while i won't tell you

what they are, just know, it's always beautiful.

hell, even wonduh fantasizes, lol

((thought #2, fuck the rules))

i middle finger the establishment, the poetical authority, stalwarts, etc,

imagine if i were a traditionalist from the metaphysical,

romanticism, elizabethian era, i'd lose my damn mind. i write to my

own rules, with the poetical forms that are used

((thought #3, ask ?'s))

on the real, i know some of my work can be difficult, and thus

i always welcome ?'s. usually you will get a response from me explaining

the theme of my writes. thus there is a clear understanding.

((thought #4, i don't write dis poetry))

straight up, if you're waiting for me to expend creative energy

cursing someone out in a write, straight up, keep inhalin

any beef, disagreements w/ writers i handle in private. furthermore,

i refuse to get caught up in gsp bullshit.

sidenote, i dis the establishment, i.e, politicians, christian hypocrites,

republicans, racists, etc.

((thought #5, he's an artist, therefore he's sensitive bout his shit))

ever wonder why you might see shit i wrote a year back recreated

i find different ideas for certain writes, i.e. fro'puffs

i'm my own worst critic, if the shit's wack, it's removed. why post bs?

((thought #6, there's a message in the writing))

anything that i write, whether it's bout issues in the sudanese peninsula

us, socioeconomic racism, love, science of life, there's always a

message in my writing. last time i checked, we have a voice w/ writing

never know when someone is asking for help, needs inspiring, motivating

etc

((thought # 7, explore creative territory, specially w/ sex writes))

feels like i'm reading instructions on how to fuck, i lightweight got that mastered

notice, i don't like being so over the top. so dick, pussy, beautiful words like

that, you very rarely see in my pieces. you do, however, get the effect (hopefully)

sidenote #2, i keep them short in nature for the simple fact, that

a) draggin the write out kills the vibe

b) imagination runs wild when you see the write as a picture, and how long do

you stare at a picture?

((thought # 8, wonduh dumbs nothin down, period))

on & off this, i refuse to reduce myself to the lowest educational terms. can't help it

that i like to be, well, intelligent, so therefore my writes come off as, well

intelligent. it's an old habit since childhood, i like using different words, synonyms

antonyms, etc and it spills out into the writes. i despise ebonics, so shit like 3y3 s33

!$@@@, i don't feel.

((thought #9, folks depicted in my writes are changed to protect who?))

by now, many of my writes are bout people i've grew up round, l/ junior & willie shaw

old alcoholics, addicts, hustlers, etc. bout my hometown of flint, michigan

and in some cosmic ways, a tribute to my late grandfather & my days growing up round

his gamblin spot, and since many have crossed over,

these are some of their experiences told thru my writes

((thought #10, to understand me, start @ the beginning))

from write #1 to write #405, there is evolvement, we all go thru writing phases

some realize their gift and seek to build further, and other choose to remain

stagnant in their approach. don't pigeonhole yourself, be you, i honestly think many

lose themselves in transition on here. if you've ever known me well enough

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LyricOsiris
11/18/08 (10:06 AM)
Thanks for checking out my thoughts, I appreciate your sight...

 
SIDEWALKILLA
11/17/08 (10:00 AM)
what 11 been a long while

 
RedLoveSong
11/17/08 (08:53 AM)
From the heart, I truly appreciate your time and attention to my work.

 
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11/17/08 (12:38 AM)
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Kat Nicole
11/16/08 (06:52 PM)
Thank you for the comments.. Much respect - Kat


 
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