Nickname:☸۞folie à plusieurs ۞☸ Country:United States City:In Cali's Kutt's Lettin My Soul Slap And Mind be at peace...Doing Me like They Can't Do... State:CA Gender:Male Age:25 Member Since:Aug 20, 2006 Last Login:Nov 20, 2009 Poems Submitted:323 Poem Comments:1,392 Poem Views:16,072 Member Comments:117
Commented on the poem "Sands of Time" on 11/20/09 at 04:16 PM
lawdy,lordy,lawdy...my i missed this right here...yes as lead said that agape love is such a magnificent thing..and no 1 knows and feels 2 its core more then ms.Geel...i have missed u goddess..so i seen ur showcased and thought i could come and par take of pure bliss...and such is what i got...after is my dude..i love his pen he is truly a poet's poet...and u as well..this was a wonderous piece of love,passion and prose.....u already kno its a fav. god bless..hope u doing well as i am sure u 4 r.....just wanted 2 hit cha up and ur work and let u kno u've been missed and thought about highly...
Commented on the poem "Y im i so sad?" on 11/20/09 at 03:45 PM
"Y am i SO SAD?...cuz i don't want u 2 show off! I just want u 2 be u.." now that touched me..yes queen i feel u...sad that in this age..seems its easier 2 find a "physical love....i.e Lust" then a potent real love that holds true and wont become a illusion of what was...but none the less....love is the power and u have it...so if he couldn't take its impact...then he was not worth of such a love...trust i kno...love whole heartedly 2 ur depths and unconditionally...that's all u can do.and it makes u the queen u are...the equal will come along when that depth is sensed and craved...ur a very beautiful and sexy queen physically...so it makes it harder 4 u 2 find a king who's really about u and not ur outter shell...but keep ur head up and heart open...he out there looking 4 u...and ur gonna lead him right 2 u..or vice versa...god bless goddess...loved this 1 altho if left me a bit sad...
Nice song mami... sounds like a emotional heartbreak joint...i love the whole angel wing part but the emotion is blunt and raw...and the relation is obvious...but i just enjoyed how u strung it 2gether....simple and yet still so powerful in its presentation...
Commented on the poem "butterfly" on 11/20/09 at 03:39 PM
hmmm i liked this piece queen...very beautiful and alluring in its expression...a butterfly is such a soft and sensual creature...so captivating...and mysterious...gentle...this piece was all the same...loved how u was spoken...with a drive and desire beyond that of most perception...and yet still maintaining a quiet suttle awe...god bless queen this was a great scribe and i enjoyed it emmensely
Woo! damn....thats what I'm talkin bout...i just loved the swagg of this...st8 up blunt raw and real...now thats shit i love...hell yea u did this up mami...and with all that u gotta be better then"good" but round's wouldn't be limited 2 1,2,or3... if u tryin 2 be my "Equal" we gonna have a fuckfest and will most likely end up in a draw...cuz I aint Met a freakier queen then me...but i am still waiting on my equal so i can unleash 1 in the same as u said in here...delicious piece of nasty mami...let me lick it clean so u can dirty it up 4 me again and i can lick it back up...better yet should just sit on my face and let it drip down;) now that's Gud Erotica!
The Story U told Me....Bout the Man who Get's Flowers 4 The Moon....I Had it Backwards..... I Thought U Were The Moon and I was Ur Wolverine But Ur The Trickster aren't U.....I'm Just the Fool Who Got Played...Worst Part Of it Is I should Have Known....But I ignored My Insticts...I Ignored WHAT I
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Commented on the poem "Sands of Time" on 11/20/09 at 04:16 PM
