Commented on the poem "Sum Gotta Give" on 11/19/09 at 07:46 PM
Girl.. I really really enjoyed reading this.. I feel you on this one.. And the email.... good ad.. Those lines really caught my mind!!! Much Luv.. Indispensable&heart;Soul
DANG IT MAN... I wanted to check out your first work on here...AND I have to say Mr... Im glad I did... I loved this from start to finish.. Kinda didnt know what to expect but I loved how you ended it... BRAVO.....Indispensable♥Soul
Oh booooyyyy... *smiles* loved how you flowed with this... dont lose your mind tho... I heard they are hard to come by these days..lol... good scribe.. Much luve.. Indispensable♥Soul
Commented on the poem "Poor young Girl" on 11/15/09 at 09:01 PM
Deep, sad and dark.. BUT very real... Great from start to finish.. Much Luv.... Indispensable♥Soul
Love this one right here... Naz...NY state of mind.. whew.. love the concept.. Great scribe... I laughted at first cause I love this line.. Indispensable&heart;Soul