Nickname:aesthetic Country:United States City:This Place In... State:GA Gender:Female Age:17 Member Since:Feb 22, 2008 Last Login:Jan 09, 2009 Poems Submitted:33 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:191 Poem Views:1,881 Member Comments:46
Commented on the poem "Broke" on 01/05/09 at 12:55 AM
wow...this was a very emotional write...it's interesting that u offer this point of u...the depths that the mind can reach. I respect this piece for its spirit. It seemed dark, but i couldnt' find gloom in it...just an aching heart, a longing soul...great job.
WOOOOOWWWWWW. So many of my peers need to read this. So many older people need to read this. I needed to read this. This is amazing. It's demoralizing to sit and consider what this world is like...what the media force-feeds young beings...values are absent, individuality and dreams are adrift...to the point where u had to write this. So sad. But this was amazing. I have to fav it.
Commented on the poem "Edited girl" on 01/04/09 at 01:12 AM
wow...awesome concept...i love the ending, lets me know that u are indeed not the optimal subject for manipulation...i dig it...always love when a poet can express the exact opposite idea of their actual poem through those subtle hints and clues...nice
oh my...i knew i needed to read sumthing special tonight...i just didnt know what....this was it...u are like splendiferousness personified...love, love, love, love, love....awesome write....i wanna be like u when i grow up :]