Nickname:aesthetic Country:United States City:This Place In... State:GA Gender:Female Age:18 Member Since:Feb 22, 2008 Last Login:Nov 21, 2009 Poems Submitted:42 Poem Comments:273 Poem Views:3,797 Member Comments:67
Commented on the poem "Chaos Theory" on 11/21/09 at 12:25 PM
Beautiful piece. It's those simple things that create the greatest poetry. Every little thing takes place in one moment...such a nice thought...great piece.
Commented on the poem "Expendable" on 11/21/09 at 11:59 AM
This piece was definitely a treat. I liked the flow, it was unexpected in places yet it was seamless - that's hard to do...very nice piece...and good use of repetition...helped to add that bluesy feeling
While I admit that I can't take a position of neutrality due to the pure awesomeness of Jay Electronica {the dude is a king's king}, you are my new favorite poet. Truly, this sears my good side in the best way possible. I can't even speak on how much of a craftsman you are. The subtleties....whew...you should teach a class at my school, I'd be the first to register. The very first.
Oh, this hurt to read. To help build the divide between your heart and another...and for that to build one between yours and another...I mean, that hurts. I can't say I know what it's like to create such an unrelenting bitterness, but I felt like I did while reading this. This is spectacular, really.
Commented on the poem "Love Sick" on 09/28/09 at 02:01 AM
amazing concept...love is sick of "love"...i honestly have never had the pleasure of meeting love...but i know "l-o-v-e" all too well...nice way to put things