Commented on the poem "Text that Tithes" on 10/23/09 at 05:34 PM
Methinks that thee are indeed a poet and not a poser...written for the stars indeed.
Commented on the poem "Borrowed Timing" on 10/23/09 at 05:04 PM
Loved the intellectual word play n this one, and I would love to know the origin of this concept, and if my interpretation was correct. \"..only to get fucked or laid out where the doubt...etc\" Fantastic lines right there!
Commented on the poem "Blue Mourning" on 10/23/09 at 05:00 PM
This brought about mixed emotions for me: I am happy that she wised up and made an exit, yet the desolateness emanating made me want the loneliness / solitude to end. I love the story that was told here...and can identify.
Commented on the poem "Successful" on 10/23/09 at 04:57 PM
(Yes, I read it again)
Well...?
August 04, 2008 at 11:57 PM
Just mullin' about, gettin' on with the business of life.