Nickname:alastor Country:United States City:SAn Antonio State:TX Gender:Male Age:26 Member Since:Mar 23, 2008 Last Login:Nov 16, 2009 Poems Submitted:167 Poem Comments:315 Poem Views:7,058 Member Comments:55
bravo. the word play was magnificent. the cleverness unrivaled by most. the rhyme scheme immaculate. the source heart felt and spiritual. the movement evoked, incandescent. beautiful piece. congratz
Commented on the poem "Effortless" on 11/11/09 at 01:20 AM
great flow. great use of diverese vocab. this was mad clever. really dug the whole bit. keep it up. great piece
Commented on the poem "The Higher Man" on 11/11/09 at 01:16 AM
i really dig this piece. it might be a little too conspiritorial for me but i know enough to know how it all got started. money and greed reign supreme. sad state of affairs which continues to plummet in a horrid downward spiral. great piece
Commented on the poem "LOUD SILENCE" on 11/07/09 at 03:05 PM
i found this to be profoundly beautiful. i love the paradoxes. also the part about the tear drop sounding like a bomb, very deep. the imagery, all of it, made my day. thanx for the great write. keep it up
i loved the innovative nature of this piece. not very conventional subject matter. i also loved the original marriage of words you used. signs of a true wordsmith. great write
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Commented on the poem "PASSIONATELY INSANE...(AREA 25 TITLE CHALLENGE)" on 11/12/09 at 02:57 AM
