Nickname:alastor Country:United States City:SAn Antonio State:TX Gender:Male Age:25 Member Since:Mar 23, 2008 Last Login:Jan 08, 2009 Poems Submitted:130 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:262 Poem Views:3,814 Member Comments:34
this was great! my sentiments exactly. i really admire & appreciate people who've taken responsibility for their own actions & in doing so you've chosen to seek higher plains to evolve call for the rest of us to join. which to me sounds like a utopian dream gone far too long unrecognized. great write!!!
Commented on the poem "CROSSING OVER..." on 01/01/09 at 09:55 PM
great rhythm & metaphors. this piece never swayed from the cool theme. clever way to tie in every thing into this webbing tale of love. cool write 10 starz
Commented on the poem "Black America" on 01/01/09 at 09:49 PM
very inspirational! i really dig the calling out of stereotypes & the disavowing of them in this bursting proclamation. the owness is on self & each person can make a difference little by little if he or she chooses to do so. great write
Commented on the poem "Just Live" on 01/01/09 at 09:44 PM
that was cool. a nice optimistic morsel of advise. the kind you might read on a rainy day to remind you of a certain cheer that might never go away
Commented on the poem "Adonai" on 01/01/09 at 04:38 PM
wow! to have a view into this truly sacred area. to be able to be vulnerable enough to write this is truly something divine. this poem for me has a kind of forsaken tone. but to able to expell these kind of potent emotions in such a eloquent manner surely does give proof of some sort of spiritual presence guiding. we all question faith; that is why it is called faith & not certainty. great write
the becoming
November 06, 2008 at 11:06 PM
it seems a momentus ocassion has presented itelf. let's take notice & take full seizure of this moment & let all be known & heard that the heavens shall rumble & rupture & all gods shall know that perseverance conquors all. the upheaval is at hand & the infinite is possible if we manage to maintain this vision very near & dear our hearts
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Commented on the poem "MATERIALISTIC INDIVIDUALS" on 01/06/09 at 08:43 PM
