Commented on the poem "Caught" on 07/16/07 at 07:12 PM
awww okay this was real short yet sweet. nice flow tight words keep up the good work ma i'mma give it 8starz only becuz i'm being real not alot off ppl on this site will do that but u are a good writer real talk
awwwwwww this is a lovely right ma!!!i think this is my very 1st time ever reading one of your writes but u do have great vocabulary and a tight flow keep up the good work 10starz
Commented on the poem "Caged Emotions" on 07/13/07 at 04:23 PM
10STARZ!!!!!! very beautiful ma, u birthed a magical poem with warm words. and the flow was there keep up the good work ma, and i know what u are going through ....10STARZ!!!!!! excellent work
this was deep and i can tell u did this like right around the moment that you was feeling this way but i do feel like it needs to be a little more to this but u did good boo no lie ill give u 8starz
sweet!!!!! this is a great poem!!! i like the flow it was real smooth. and its real!! everybody gets a second chance at things that is worth having, and i'm glad u did 10starz!!!!
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Commented on the poem "Caught" on 07/16/07 at 07:12 PM
