Commented on the poem "Life chronicle" on 10/25/08 at 08:46 AM
beautiful describtion
Commented on the poem "inside my mind" on 10/25/08 at 08:42 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem, but try using punctuation so i can tell my mind to stop or pause. you might have meant for my mind not to stop but nevertheless I enjoyed reading this poem.
Commented on the poem "slow return" on 10/25/08 at 08:40 AM
this is an interesting poem that made think about what you were talking about. i enjoyed reading this poem
man...i was tearing up while reading this because i thought about my classmate that died. but love how you connected the words and i loved the music with it. good job!
once again you never cease to amaze me. this kinda sounds like what happens when my mom gets mad...even though i know this has deeper meaning. the lines "the rage easily promotes usage of sin, Gives birth a new form of savagery" are my favorites lines because it reminded me of history lesson in class. but anyways, wonderful read. 10starz
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Commented on the poem "Life chronicle" on 10/25/08 at 08:46 AM
