Commented on the poem "I whispered" on 08/06/08 at 01:42 PM
well damn. for an entry so small, the concept seems huge. i like this entry a lot. simple yet says something major in a wierd way. cool.
Commented on the poem "Confession" on 08/06/08 at 01:38 PM
this poem tricked the shit out of me... i was really into it thinking it was a human to human relationship gone wrong. great use of creativity. i loved this one. maybe next time i read one of your poems, i'll read the last line first. cuz that shit had me fooled. nice.
nice!!! whoever came up with that bullshit about hip hop being dead just got a heavy punch to the mouth with THIS entry. damn good response. i couldn't have said this any better. hip hop may never be as political as it used to be, but we'll let the government handle their own problems. it's still good beats and great rhymes from luda and weezy and others. new blood with more talent steady coming in by the day. hip hop will NEVER die! u hit the nail right on the head, ma. ten stars.
this is gonna sound retarded, but this poem makes me feel like i'm at the beach. mellow just out. this is good stuff. dang, lady, you should write a book. you seem to have all these hits. keep them coming. ten stars.
Commented on the poem ""Potter Me Love"" on 08/02/08 at 03:35 PM
ooh!!! THIS is why i LOVE POETRY!! this was so sweet, so soothing, so smooth going down, so beautiful... AND I'M A DUDE SAYING ALL THIS!! i'm wacky like that, but this poem mellowed me out. i REALY enjoyed this. i might ebd up reading all of your work. great stuff.
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Commented on the poem "I whispered" on 08/06/08 at 01:42 PM
