This poem reminds me of one I've had locked up in my journal for a few months now... I might finish it up and post it as a response to this one... depends on my mood... But, yeah... I'm feeling this one. The best poets never take the journey alone... they take their readers right along with them. (...that includes you, poet)
Commented on the poem "hand full of you" on 11/14/09 at 03:53 PM
Okay, I'm taking notes over here... your shortest writes are some of the most hard-hitting ones I have ever seen!! It blows me away. Great job.
Commented on the poem "short poem # 2" on 11/14/09 at 03:50 PM
This poem was short, but it packed quite a punch. Sometimes compromising ourselves to keep someone else reduces us to a level we eventually will have to pick ourselves up from - the easy way, or the hard way. Boy... when experience speaks... it speaks LOUDLY.
Commented on the poem "yoga" on 11/14/09 at 03:47 PM
Very different write for me, coming from you... but I'm feeling your flexibility here. Very nicely done.. truth was most definitely spoken (even in abstract form). Nice
Commented on the poem "southern tea" on 11/14/09 at 03:44 PM
This write is a classic. I love everything about it - from the title to the way you expressed yourself poetically. Truly a grown-man write right here!! lol I love it. (...been a long time, friend)
" Be not forgetful to entertain strangers: for thereby some have entertained angels unawares. "
[Hebrews 13:2 ]
LOL? :) ... enjoy... nice people , nice poetry... almost like love given freely ... thanks :)