yes teen violence gotta stop..ilost a friend from grammer school..he got shot he made a couple mistakes ans the shot him while he was tryina get if together..everyday ipray that someone ikno doesnt end up on the news..dead..its painfull to watch ppl my age go down over something to petty cus we the future..as far as ur poem..good write..its starts a long need revolotion that ppl have trouble carryin out.
Commented on the poem "Deep thoughts" on 11/15/09 at 05:57 PM
lol..this one the joint u sit u at home a u figure hey u horny so u call u the mrs and u made this up whilel she was on her way..nice erotic joint
Commented on the poem "Hurt" on 11/15/09 at 05:54 PM
ican truely say i can relate im goin thru it rite now..only u can do is try to stay strong..since i can relate this draw my attetion, great how u got ur emotions in words..good poem