Commented on the poem "WOMAN LIKE ME?" on 09/10/08 at 03:29 AM
thatz deep..to bad not all women, or men for that matter, strive to be what they want to be. or do what they want to do. some ppl dnt understand that life iz what you make it, nd then they just stop at dreams. Dreams can only get u so far, it is what u do with those dreams that matter. but then again, like you said, it would help if they where more realistic. anyways though, this is a good piece..look forward to seein more.
thtz hott..Make me wanna have someone to cater 2 me..lolz realtlk though..Everybdy got there own special queen, right??? but no need for her to cleanse my feet..lolz but itz hott when u can feel pleasure non-physicallii..Nice write
Commented on the poem "Trying 2 Forget" on 02/01/08 at 02:43 AM
this a good write..nd madd tru..no mattr how much u try to let them go, they still remain in thought..but eventuallii u move on knowin tht there iz more beyond tht one person..You jus gotta kno when to step awaii..Staii up..1
Commented on the poem "Im Me." on 02/01/08 at 02:27 AM
damn yo..sumtymz it jus gotta be said..Ppl try to knock u thinkin they some kinda superior..lyk they bettr then u..but lyk u said, everybody got there own style, so dnt knock me for minez..good shyt
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