midnight snacks??? lol is that what i think it is? but this is very descriptive and still classy like always when it comes to your eroticism. definitely lovin th is
Commented on the poem "Diamond" on 04/20/08 at 09:51 PM
you're right, its just a rock...or rather coal that has forced itself to be one. i liked the other joint better but your message here was still powerful. gotta recognize hotness...8
Commented on the poem "Cigarette" on 04/20/08 at 08:59 PM
i know that talent knows no age but are you really 14? your poetry has such a mature feel to it and its so engaging. you placed the right words in the right places and kept just enough subtlety to make it metaphorical. wow u gifted yo. 10
aw shit how the fuck did i miss this?? i was just bout to ask u when u was gonna do some more solo pieces. this kinda sex is the shit lol you got me bout to go write a piece for me and mine. great write especially because it can inspire no matter how erotic it is. you know this is 10*
Commented on the poem "Arrested" on 04/15/08 at 07:24 PM
i like this. the way u wrote it made it a lil humorous but it still could put u in the mood. the shit about the pump was signature lol. thats a memorable line.
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Commented on the poem "In Need...Of Something...Solid" on 04/24/08 at 08:45 AM
