I think I did a better job then everyone else who responded to your poem :)
Commented on the poem "Note To Self" on 08/09/09 at 10:33 PM
Its terrible to see bad things happen to good people. I can really feel your emotions on this one and it kinda forces me to see where u coming from. either i been thru somethin like that or not. Nice wrote, i mean write. Keep it up. Get at me
Commented on the poem "let me be free" on 08/09/09 at 10:21 PM
You sound like a run away slave. LOL I definitely get the concept on this one. shows the pain and the struggle that your going thru. Very creative how you put it together to. Nice write. Get at me
Commented on the poem "EXCUSE ME" on 08/09/09 at 09:43 PM
Girl you better say hi back when I say hi. . . lol j/k nice write. I wonder what ur miserable about???? Anyway good write, keep it up. Get at me
Commented on the poem "GAMES" on 08/09/09 at 09:32 PM
"Love doesn't love you" Classic. I agree with holliday cause that can go both ways. This sounds like your emotions be takin control sometimes. Happens to the best of us. Very discriptive write. Keep up the good work. Get at me