i'm takin notes. this is the type of talent that i love seeing on GS. i learn from the best and this is one the best love poems ive read on here. i was intrigued by your opening line and it was golden from there. keep it up.
Commented on the poem "~CAKIN~" on 01/31/09 at 12:45 PM
i like this. very different from i'm used to reading. keep doin it.
Commented on the poem "mind sex" on 01/31/09 at 12:18 PM
very freaky girl! i dig this. you put alot of thoughts in my head. i need to relax lol
loved this joint. you got plenty of time sweety, love isnt something you can just rush. flip that hourglass upside down and live your life. beautifully written