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	Nickname: BlackJesus13 Country: United States City: Bronx State: NY Gender: Male Age: 24 Member Since: Oct 18, 2006 Last Login: Oct 08, 2009 Poems Submitted: 65 Poem Comments: 550 Poem Views: 6,146 Member Comments: 320

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I'm Funny. I'm Witty but at times I can be Slow. I'm Charismatic, and full of myself. I enjoy a good conversation. I'm somewhat of a Homebody. Laid back but at the same time LOUD.(In public I act up but in a intimate setting I's be a bit more reserved but still funny) Loyal. Unintentionally disrespectful at times. I open door for girls (pretty ones) I spit when I talk and I have a Lisp. I like watchin T.V, Reading (Books & Magazines), Partyin' and Bullshitin' w/ n***as (BMG!). I'm a very likeable person. (if you dont like me you obviously have a brain tumor) I'm a Man's Man (Sports,Cars,Punching people in the face) but I'm also a Ladies Man. ( That means I'll force you t'sit through a basketball game then turn around and watch some girlfriends with you and give ya some good lovin after that, BANG! BANG!) I'm Cocky but Insecure as hell. I have few close friends but I know almost everybody.

1. You're Beautiful To God
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2. Sold Out (u.s. Not O...
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3. Illuminati
by Amira's mommy♥

4. So Sad
by Sentinal

5. Universal Mind Control
by ThepureBlackpoet

6. Sun-beam
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7. Occ
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8. Exclusive Rights C...
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9. Truth Of Slavery{p.1}
by ThepureBlackpoet

10. Tryst At Dawn ...
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TITLE	CATEGORY	DATE SUBMITTED	VIEWS	COMMENTS
"The Wake Up (Part A)"	war	05/14/07 (11:33 AM)	107	11
"Give It Back!"	life	11/17/06 (09:45 PM)	217	32
Shine, 80's Baby, Shine.	love	11/14/06 (03:34 PM)	199	27
"I Am Not Original"	life	07/13/09 (01:49 PM)	27	3
"Coming Up Roses"	love	07/13/09 (01:20 PM)	24	3
"Egg On My Face"	life	02/14/09 (04:16 PM)	35	3
"The Bird and the Bee."	spoken	02/10/09 (06:53 PM)	64	5
"What Is Gone..."	mourning	01/28/09 (10:46 PM)	63	4
"Pop Is Short For Popular."	life	01/22/09 (09:16 PM)	60	7
"The Sickness In My Right Hand."/"The...	life	01/18/09 (07:20 PM)	57	8

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Commented on the poem "Blue" on 07/18/09 at 05:24 AM

This reminds of a mixtape that I'm currently listening to and coincidentially it's by a rap artist named Blu. lol The mood of this poem was so tranquil, so free structure. And the irony of it all. Great read.

Commented on the poem "CAN'T BE." on 07/18/09 at 05:14 AM

This was very stern. As I read from the beginning I expected it to be a bit more softer than piece than it ended up being. Nice read.

Commented on the poem "The Bandit" on 02/18/09 at 06:08 PM

I like this. Very experimental. I'm loving the "911 call" theme that you went with. I actually enjoyed reading every line, I wondered where you'd take us next. I also liked the part describe what the "suspect" was wearing but I wanted you to do more with it. But again, the concept is cool beans and the execution was genuine and effortless.

Commented on the poem ""Addicktion"" on 02/11/09 at 04:31 PM

This was lustifully intellectual. You completely doubled-up without me knowing lol Does this mean that I too must post two pieces at a time? Lol But all jokes aside, this was a tremendously sensual piece. In a oxymoronish sense, Its almost as if you're describing an outer body experience that somehow occured inwardly. (If that makes sense Lol) Lovely piece. Im impressed as well as intimidated.

Commented on the poem "Who Shot John" on 02/11/09 at 03:03 PM

This was piece has a very cold and distant tone; almost rigid. I liked the fact that it didn't following any definite rhyming structure. It's like you chose to give us a rhyming sequence here and there but you mainly kept journalistic seriousness throughout the piece. Oatmeal with a teaspoon of brown sugar? Lol By the way, I love the wrap up at the end.

Lackluster Reception

July 18, 2009 at 05:05 AM

Unfortunately my new pieces haven't been so well received and I think I know why; they were empty. I wrote with my head and not with my gut... or maybe is was vice versa. I usually "polish" my works for style points but this time I produced something so raw, so foreign, and artificial (lol) that even I myself can hardly recognize it. Sure I tried to hold fast to the familiar process I usually use to produce a "successful" poem but something is happening and it's affecting my art. I usually primp my pieces in order to connect with those who I think might read them but this time I sugarcoated nothing... rendering my latest pieces to unrelatable pretentious scribbles.

As of now, each day that passes takes a bit of my authenticity with it. Am I meant to be "unrelatable" and "misunderstood"? Was Kaufman "unrelatable" and "misunderstood"? Or was he lauded? Did anyone ever just say to him "I can't dig it man." or were they just always gushing: "Outta sight Bob, that piece was groovy."

I'm trying...