Commented on the poem "FUCK YOURSELF" on 10/23/07 at 07:18 AM
peace between you and me ally :)
"With morbid womanly aches" tell me about it! far out i've been having the worse damn period pains today lol.. probs not what you meant by that line but it's the first thing that came to mind...
I am absolutely in love with the lines
'I have drowned
Tears drown my brain'
Great poem, love the flow of WORDS, just to clarify that there will NEVER be a day that I'd love to see you cry.
Commented on the poem "Pretend Games" on 06/18/07 at 07:09 AM
Love the poem, just remember that more times than not; life is one big charade.
Commented on the poem "My lucky day" on 06/18/07 at 05:52 AM
Wow. I love that you wrote both perspectives of the sniper and the would-be victim. Really brings a deeper meaning to the poems by reading both sides of the story.
Commented on the poem "Something else" on 06/18/07 at 05:50 AM
"As long as I am a good person
That is good enough for me"
Remember that good and evil are merely perspectives, all that matters is how you perceive yourself.
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