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	Nickname: brokensparrow Country: Australia City: In the Clouds State: ACT Gender: Female Age: 19 Member Since: Jun 28, 2007 Last Login: Sep 15, 2008 Poems Submitted: 0 Poem Comments: 0 Poem Views: 0 Member Comments: 0

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1. Pe Poetry (she Said ...
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2. The Real
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3. When The Angel Fallen
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4. P3rf3ctly P0siti0n3d...
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5. Hi Baby,
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6. Unimpressed
by Princess_Kit

7. Champ Are You Ready?...
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8. Sub Fairy
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9. We Were Never Meant ...
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10. Dedicated 2 My Zoe Baby
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Commented on the poem "Damn My Dick" on 10/03/07 at 06:42 AM

is the last line meant to be 'got damn my dick?' or did you mean god damn my dick.tis an interesting message to send out to the poetic world.

Commented on the poem "Lee" on 09/02/07 at 08:00 AM

*nods*

Commented on the poem "Polly" on 08/30/07 at 06:21 PM

... XD

Commented on the poem "YOUR THE REASON I WANT TO DIE PT 1" on 08/26/07 at 07:10 AM

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Commented on the poem "For The Girl" on 08/26/07 at 07:04 AM

lines five and six in the second stanza should be combined i think, to help with the rythm and make 'things look brighter' stand out more. apart from that though, v nice