Commented on the poem "Untitled10." on 11/09/09 at 01:15 PM
i really enjoyed this piece its was very soothing to me ... i got alot of visuals from it takes me to a place where i can feel free to be myself ... where i dont have to worry about stepping outside naked for fear i will be arrested for being who i am .. the lingering impression of this is a feeling of safety and compassion and i love it ... not many people make me feel like this in my life and im gald i could come and read something that does ... give me hope in the future that there is someone out there that can sooth not jsut my mind but the mind of all those that are worthy of feeling something like this in them ... a poets job is to touch someone without touching them to give them feeling without knowing them ... to hear them and speak to them in secret ... i think the bond between a poet and the reader is only as strong as the read is willing to let the words be to them ... and as i am always as open as i can be i accept all poets fro what they are and if they speak loud enough i will hear them ... and sometimes is only but a whisper ... but thats when i know its a real poet ... when a whisper is all it takes to get me to feel thier words :) it was my honor to read this and my pleasure to comment on it for you
one words is alot to a poet ... one word can mean the world or even a whole novel ... jsut by seeing hearing or speaking it can take them in so many different places ... i dont think it would matter what the one word would be if you tattooed it on your body i think the message would be clear ... and as a poet i would understand ... as long as it meant something to you ... cuase the greatest thing a poet can do is make one word mean so much to someone else ... all it takes is one word and you can change the life of another ... its all in how much you mean it ... if you say it with conviction .... if you have emotion in your voice ... or feeling in your words.... you can do anything ... make anyone see anything you want them too... you have the power to reach out and touch people in ways that people dont beelive they can be touched anymore ... the time of the poet is now long since lost amoug all this techo bullshit and numbers of profit .... its all about making money or getting yours ... i say fuck that ... i dont give a shit if people read me or not .... in fact if they are jsut gona bullshit me i would rather they way right on by .... and miss out on what i have to offer them ... i have so much to give and no one worthy enough to give it to except for a very few ... and its those that understand me .. and those that accept me ... fuck everyone else .... i dont have time for them anymore ... its all about one word ... everything is ... one word can change the way you see people and the way people see you ... and for me its always more then not hurtful as i choose to not blend into this world as it stands right now ... but i will say this ... at least i will die with a clear mind ... and a full heart ... which is more then i can say for the rest of this world ... they can play all the games they want to.... but im not gona satisfy their need for shit .... its all about one word ... the choice of word is up to you but make that one word mean something and watch it change the lives of everyone around you .... it was my honor to read this and my pleasure to comment on it for you
im loving your erotic pieces ... im so involved with them when i read them ... not like many on here that write to arouse or to get nasty remarks or even attention ... you dig it deeper and feed the intellect with thoughts that are only erotic to the minds that see beyond skin and sex.... i love that ... gives you a deep meaning about you ... like that you could love so strong ... and if your heart was to change you would too... i dont think your one that would stay in a dead relationship for no reason ... cuase if you give yourself it most likely is completely ... or not at all ... but then again im sure you have to satify those human urges ... and well who am i to say how or when you should ...:) but honestly i really enjoy your words and they do turn me on ... but they also make me feel and its that feeling that i love to feel .... it was my honor to read this and my pleasure to comment on it for you
Commented on the poem "Adrift" on 11/09/09 at 12:36 PM
i dont know but i feel hurt from this ... maybe its not the emotion i wish to feel but it is what fills me up when i read the words you wrote ... and then under that its love ... and it feels good but the hurts is killing it for me ... i feel a pain here and im not sure to what direction it is comeing from or going to ... maybe its jsut how im thinking of the poem i guess ... i dont know ... but sometime i hurt like this... and well i have been hurting for a while now ... i do get moments of happiness but nothing that can be sustanied for any amount of time ... and well i guess im jsut feeling it more then maybe i should ... but i do feel it hard and heavy ... almost made me cry to be honest ... i felt like my heart was being ripped out ... like the twisting pain was laughing at me ... and for my compassion i get nothing .... and its so cold ... i cant even be warmed by starting a fire anymore ... set my whole life ablaze and jsut watch as my whole life burns before my eyes ... and here i stand holding the matches ... and i would say ... i jsut dont care .... it was my honor to read this and my pleasure to comment on it for you
Commented on the poem "07.09 Untitled" on 11/09/09 at 12:30 PM
your words seem endless ... it takes me away to places that are unique to your words ... i lvoe the thoughts i have from reading you .... its like what you depict is something that i could have ... but yet i know its what you have felt ... your the poet and your fellings even if not your own are amazing to read and i lvoe reading them cause they give me feeling i have either not felt in a long time or have never felt ... and to me when someone gives me something new to feel... well it jsut makes me want to melt into thier words more ... i really enjoy reading you ... you give more through your words them most do in all their peices put together ... maybe i can jsut feel you more then i feel others but im almost certian that its not that but that you are a great poet inside and that i can see it in what you write ... i love it ... it was my honor to read this and my pleasure to comment on it for you
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Commented on the poem "Untitled10." on 11/09/09 at 01:15 PM
