wow very powerful .... i felt this almost to be cold like you wish to be without emotion ... to have felt hurt like this i would wish on no one ... and yet i only know that cause i have felt it myself ... been to the bottom of the barrel and froced to drown myself with the water of life ... making it hard to breath and even harder to feel.... the words speak to me ... and i listen to hear back even a slight noise ... to know your alright... feeling like this might not be in the moment ... but to be able to write like this you need to have felt it ... and pushed the pen becuase of it ... im only sorry that you had to know of this ... to have felt it as much as i feel it now ... makes me sad that others didnt treat you with more care ... cuase the fragil state of things ... can go real bad real quick ... and without warning ... jsut know ill always be here for you ... no matter what .... it was my honor to read this and my pleasure ot comment on it for you
WOW OMG i love it .... i swear i never though of it coming off like this ... your really took the word and made it your own .... you are a true PATRIOT to your own style and i fucking love it ... you are such a great poet and im glad i know you ... OMG i jsut cant beleive how much i love it .... i dont think anyone else could even come close to how you did this challenge ... cause most of them are going to think within the box and not want to step outside of it ... you jsut took the box and cut that shit up with a knife and left it in peices on the street .... i could feel like you were standing in front of me putting your foot down and telling me how it was gona be ... god i love it ... :) :) :) you are so awesome ... it was my honor to read this and my pleasure ot comment on it for you
Commented on the poem "08.01.09 To you…" on 10/30/09 at 11:31 PM
i really loved this ... it was very erotic to me ... this is how i think erotic work should be ... very subtle and calm .... loving and gentle .... i would write like this but i dont think many would find it appealing coming from me ... as i have one up now thats more light then most and it doesnt get any comments on it so ... why go deeper and lighter if its not gona me worth it for me to do so .... and its really why i dont do much erotic any more ... i think people on here would not enjoy it the way they should ... so i keep it for myself ... but i loved this .... it turned me on and made me feel really good ... your words are so poetic ... i really do love your work alot .... its very addicting to read :) it was my honor to read this and my pleasure to comment on it for you
Commented on the poem "Consensual" on 10/30/09 at 10:37 AM
i like this one jsut becasue of how my mind thinks when i read it ... give me many different thoughts as i read your words ... this is the kind of work i love to read from you ... and its more then whats on the surface of the words you use but the feeling i get from how you use those words to bring out your feeling at the moment ... and i know your feeling jsut what i do cause you convey your emotions very well through your thoughts that your write ... its very poetic and i have to say you are a great poet that is underrated here ... you should be in the spotlight cause the way your mind works is purely poetic and that have a priceless value to me ... you are worth every second of my time that i spend reading you ... and i enjoy reading every word you let me read.... :) so thank you for sharing ... cause im really enjoying what it is im reading :) it was my honor to read this and my pleasure to comment on it for you
Commented on the poem "Animal Sex" on 10/30/09 at 10:19 AM
im not sure if the words hit me harder or the visuals in my head ... the way your write jsut grabs me sometimes and does not let go of me .... you make me think things no one else could ... and i see jsut how you make me feel ... the words are the right amount of just what i need when i read your work... its like you plan forever each word and its placement .... you really had me hard with this one ... the feeling of being that close to you and being that open with you ... jsut i dont know made me feel so many things at once ... it was good and bad at the same time ... i will say i did enjoy reading this and i really enjoyed thinking of it but i cant help think i feel be for enjoying your words :) cuase im not sure if i am meant to enjoy you like i do ... but then agian im not going to stop either .... it was my honor to read this and my pleasure ot comment on it for you
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